Intro for a faction

[Warzoneone]

Hi guys , I just made this video , tell me what you think ..
http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=DpeyGIT3McY
Here,is the new one fixed
http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=kPAcFxH...ture=c4-feed-u

[KingDante!]

You just took faction recruiting to another level lol

Serious business

[CJ D]

Pretty nice dude. You have a couple issues. You have "moderen war" instead of modern. And you invite code goes too quick. Guys won't have time to write it down. Yes, they can pause it or replay it...but make it easier for them. Put some other info in there...goals, objectives, etc. bonuses change do no need there.

Oh yeah....and please hit the little x on your game after you hold it for three seconds. You're entirely too ate up with it! Lol

[Starling]

Agree with previous posts. Very cool indeed. Invite code goes by too quick. I would also look for info on bonuses or previous history or wars kind of thing. Nice work though.

[candyson]

When you transition from the invite code to the faction name, I'd suggest causing the faction code slide down on the screen and have the name appear above the code

[Ghost-12]

0.13 wrong modern!

[androiduser]

What are your factions stats?

[Warzoneone]

What are your factions stats?

Not so high , but we getting ther
http://postimg.org/image/6wzgvpex9/

[Tito89]

Not so high , but we getting ther
http://postimg.org/image/6wzgvpex9/

for 9 members thats pretty good. really liked the video, shame i got no gold for it lol.

[Warzoneone]

is that better ?

[warrends]

is that better ?

Yes. Much.

Good luck with your faction. If you're serious enough to put time into a video, you deserve the best.

[pedrombv]

Very nice indeed, the second is perfect You bring another level to the recruiting

[jrb22250]

Way too much time on your hands!

[phyx]

needs more info, good start though...

[Warzoneone]

I don't want to post my stats and all here . It's not the place to so so just wanted to show of
Any way it cost me 5$ to do it .if any one wants